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Sequence Outline Script: 1st Draft

Tue Jun 30, 2009, 2:44 AM
Ace Castillo 2005



BAR. EXT. DAY

EST SHOT outside a bar showing a typical business day,
students, youth customers going in and out of the bar.

CUT TO

BAR. INT. DAY

FS to a group of students having beer drinks, smoking,
eating and having conversations. JUGGLE SHOT, MS on one of
the student whose taking a NAP with MOUTH wide open, ECU
towards inside the mouth.swirls and then fades out

CUT TO

OPEN STREET. EXT. DAY

FS to a group of kids playing "CHINESE GARTER", MS to a girl
playing the same, RF to a boy observing behind checking her
out,smiling. POV of the boy checking her out, FS following
the boy gets up and walks towards the girl, stops along the
way and picks up a few SANTAN FLOWERS, CU of the boys hand
holding carefully the SANTAN FLOWERS, MS of the boy
approaching the girl, MS boy giving or handing over the
SANTAN FLOWERS to the girl, CU of the girl smiling. but
suddenly disrupts by a sound of a car approaching.

CUT TO

OPEN STREET. EXT. DAY

FS LOW ANGLE of a very decent white car approaching then
stops. FS of the door side of the car, opens and 2 fat boys
comes out of the car MS of the 2 fat boys standing and
grinning while holding a box of toys and presents.CU to the
boys face, scared and annoyed. MS of the 2 fat boys, bullies
the boy while they approach the girl. CU on the SANTAN
FLOWERS falling down on slow motion. MS of the 2 fat boys
giving their gifts and presents to the girl. MS of the boy
sadly walking away. MS of the girl puts down the gifts and
presents then picks up the SANTAN FLOWERS. FS of the boy
walking towards the stairs where he came from and sits. MS
on the boy looking very sad, still with a few SANTAN FLOWERS
that he werent able to give and the few ones that were left
when the others fell to the ground, puts down his head on
his knees and then fell asleep. CU on the SANTAN FLOWERS
changes to a boquet of RED ROSE (POST-PRODUCTION SFX). MS of
the boy who became a man now (on a fine arts college
uniform), suddenly wokes up from a sleep, stares at his
wirstwatch, realizing he is already late for something
suddenly leaves with the boquet of RED ROSES on his hand.

CUT TO

A NICE ANCESTRAL HOUSE. EXT. DAY

EST SHOT on a nice house. FS on (the grown-up boy) the
man,holding a RED ROSES, walking really fast who seems to be
in a hurry. suddenly noticed a NICE LUXURIOS CAR park on the
girls house

CUT TO

INSIDE THE HOUSE OF THE GIRL. INT. DAY

MS on the man, enters the room then suddenly suprised by
what he saw. MS on a TWO FAT MAN on very decent attire
talking and courting the girl. pans to the gifts and
presents that the 2 FAT MAN gave the girl. MS of the girl
looking just accomodating but not really interested,
suddenly noticed the man, who just entered the room. FS of
the man sadly turns his back and walks away.

CUT TO

LONG OPEN PARTLY MUDDY ROAD. EXT. DAY

LS of the man walking away sadly, kicking every stones on
his way, suddenly notices a car coming from behind him. LS
of the car approaching the man. FS of the man making way for
the car approaching. MS of the car window slowly opens and
reveal the 2 FAT MAN inside, teasing, laughing and throwing
jokes at the man. POV of the man looking at the 2 FAT MAN
teasing him, feeling simply anoyed. FS of the car
accelerates on the speed purposely to make the mud and dirt
caught the man.CU on the man aggrevated but cant do nothing.

CUT TO

INSIDE THE HOUSE OF THE GIRL. INT. DAY

FS of the girl staring at all the presents and gifts that
those 2 FAT MEN gave, feels sad and unsatisfied. excitedly
walks to her room.

CUT TO

INSIDE THE GIRL'S ROOM. INT. DAY

MS of the girl approaching her drawer, gets something inside
of it. MS of the girl pulls a dried yet preserved petals,
stems and leaves of a SANTAN FLOWER, it was the one the boy
gave to her on SCENE 4, lifts it up to her nose as to smell
and smile sweetfully. FS of the girl excitedly leaves the
room.

CUT TO

BAR. INT. DAY, AS IN SEQ. 2

FS to a group of students having beer drinks, smoking,
eating and having conversations. MS on one of the
student(THE MAN) whose taking a NAP with MOUTH wide open. FS
of the girl, enters the bar as if where she is looking for
someone, walks towards the counter to ask the bar attendant.
FS of the man suddenly wakes up and walks blanky towards the
restroom at the other end corner of the bar. MS, as the girl
turns to continue the search, the two (THE MAN AND THE GIRL)
accidentaly bumps at each other and was surprised to see
each other. MS, CAMERA TRACKS AROUND THE TWO. then FADES
OUT.

END

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:iconpissdrunxx:
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thanks..by the way cool photography there!...real life tlaga..nice

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Thanks for visiting my page. Great work. :D

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Oi ACE! AHAHAHAH

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